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    Dreams and Desires (poem)

    Zeria Iiyasei
    Zeria Iiyasei
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    Dreams and Desires (poem) Empty Dreams and Desires (poem)

    Post by Zeria Iiyasei Sat Dec 20, 2008 11:53 pm

    okiiez...I've never posted my poetry here before. But I'm willing to see what you all think. I'm up for constructive criticism, just please don't completely bash me. thx... :)

    Dreams and Desires: by Zeria Iiyasei


    Through the darkest night I sleep
    And dream of he who has my heart
    Wrapped in an eternity of emotion
    Spiraling down the path of love

    My heart still yearns
    Yet does not receive
    But I may dream of him
    And have faith in our future

    In every hope lies grief
    And every truth a lie
    With sorrow and tears around us
    The deepest pains within

    Living in despair
    So many cry themselves to sleep
    My life feels so empty
    Waiting for him under the stars
    JennyReika
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    Dreams and Desires (poem) Empty Re: Dreams and Desires (poem)

    Post by JennyReika Sun Dec 21, 2008 1:10 am

    :(

    Makes me so sad to see my baby sad.

    Dont worry, your mother loves you and she will cuddles you...

    Your poem is absolutely beautiful in such a dark Zeria type of way, I just adore it, and I adore you. I think youre so smart, and so pretty. Youre just my dark little ball of perfection.

    I hope you will post more for us all to see.

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