Sozen Kurosame

by Sozen Kurosame Thu May 21, 2015 5:10 am

Sozen Kurosame

Sozen Kurosame: Human; Posts : 9
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Sozen Kurosame

by Sozen Kurosame Thu May 21, 2015 5:10 am

(Your character here)

Sozen Kurosame

"My apologies, I didn't know you weren't used to fighting demons"

Basic Information:

Name: Sozen Kurosame
Age: Unknown
Age Appearance: 27
Gender: Male
Affiliation: Gotei 13
Division: Division Six
Rank: Captain

Appearance:
Height/Weight: 6'0/174 lbs.

Description: This is the most handsome man in Soul Society. Handsome, good looking, attractive, gorgeous, damned sexy, you name it! He has a lot of adjectives and terms that can apply to him, but the bottom line is that there's no one in the Soul Society with looks to really rival his. All girls are constantly squealing in fangirl fandom because of how much they love him. He's also the most eligible bachelor in Soul Society, and people who work for media always want to interview him. He manages to escape all the time though. His looks blow people out of the water. He also dresses well, an elegant man. His perfection is a marvel for everyone. Many people think that he's a pretty boy who spends more time making himself look good than training. They're wrong. He's not only powerful, but looks good naturally.

His hair is perfectly straight, and neatly combed. It's a silky texture, and jet black too. The length is one that is in between, with the hair falling neatly at the sides, parted so that not only does it only minimally touch the forehead, but it never gets in his eyes. It is well groomed and conditioned so that it stays in place, almost like a magic trick, even when he is in combat. His hair almost never seems to move, as if he is a perfectly super attractive wax figure. Sozen's hair passes over his ears. It's long enough to cover them, but is trimmed just neatly enough that it passes over them, allowing his ears to be seen and his hearing to be unaffected.

His skin is soft, smooth, and warm. In touch, he's everything that fangirls typically want in a man's touch. His hands are warm, his face is warm, and his body is warm. He isn't so pale that it's like he never ventures outside. Quite to the contrast, he is always venturing outside. His tone is simply fair by genetics, and he is light skinned from that. His skin is perfect, in that there is not a single mark on his body. No one knows why, but Sozen has a "perfect healing" ability with his reiatsu. His reiatsu naturally causes wounds to heal completely if they don't leave handicapping damage. He's never left with scars. He has no scars, no blemishes, no moles, no birth marks. He has no distinguishing marks or bumps on his perfect, smooth skin.

This isn't to say that his skin isn't solid. To the contrary of that as well, Sozen has hard muscles. His shoulders are big and strong in a good working shape. People don't see him as the type to train a lot, but Sozen spends a lot of his time training his techniques to make them stronger. He regularly spends time molding his body with training as well. His muscularity is well toned on the body, but it's a thin toning. He isn't a body builder, but his body feels hard, and is pleasuring to the touch. This is because of all things, he excels the most in looks. He has good muscles in the limbs, and a pack of abs in six on the stomach.

His face is attractive. He's good looking, and boasts a perfect, calm face which usually also has a confident sliver of a smile on it. His eyes are a bit narrow, and are shown to always reflect a calm expression, showing that he is calm and also vain. He is known to believe that there is nothing that he cannot do once he sets himself out to do it. His nose, chin, and in fact his entire face seem to reflect perfect features of a perfectly attractive young man, appearing to be in his late twenties physically. He is young, in the prime of his body, and has a breath-taking personality as well.

Even though his eyes are unusual, they don't take away from his attractiveness at all. His eyes are a bright red color, and they never change. They always stay this way, exactly the same. They are actually quite fitting to a title that he was given. Some people have called him "Bloody Massacre" when he battles. Particularly the bloody part, as red is his signature color. His red eyes reflect a calmness that no one else ever has, and a confidence that he can do anything that he vows to do. His eyes can reflect passion too, and rarely do they express negative emotions like anger, or like hopelessness or lust.

Though he wears a black haramaki robe and pants set outfit, like all Shinigami do, his outfit is quite expensive and customized. He is quite finicky about this outfit in particular, and claims that it is that which he fights best in. It is made of the finest cloth material. It is warm, comfortable, and certainly close to silk in how fine and expensive it is. The design boasts gray flower patterns across the sleeves and lower torso half of the outfit. His sash is also black, and kindly houses a black sheathe for his black wrapped hilt katana. His outfit makes him look quite gorgeous too, according to many girls.

He doesn't actually often like to wear the formal things, though he wears them anyway. He has his white Captain haori on his person, wearing it in a normal, and traditional manner. He also has the ceremonial combs of the Kurosame family on his person, tucked within his robe just at the heart. He does not like to wear them, but this is not to say that he doesn't have them. He can wear them if he so chooses to, but he chooses not to. It is simply proper for him to keep them on his person at all times, so that he can prove he is a Kurosame, as the combs are a one of a kind Kurosame brand, and cannot be replicated by anyone that is not of the Kurosame family.

His reiatsu is unique, and doesn't give off an aura of light or energy. The only time his reiatsu can be truly seen is when his eyes are glowing, and black flower petals are flowing around him. His body becomes surrounded in calmly flowing sakura petals, except black in color. This is the image of a Kurosame, and not just any Kurosame, but the Kurosame Head Captain. Contrary to a minority of beliefs, Sozen is the rightful heir of the Kurosame. He is the first heir, and the absolute first in line for the job too. When he returned home after a trip, he had no quarrels with anyone, and they immediately let him ascend, such was his presence and power.

Face Claim: Sebastian from Kuroshitsuji

Personality:Taking the appearance of a tall and calm figure, Sozen is always seen acting as a noble should. He is an example of a good noble, but also because he needs to play the part well. It is of utmost importance that he acts sparkly clean, and perfect. It is of imperative importance that he acts like nothing is wrong with him, and that he has done nothing that a noble should not do. He is always strutting his own personality and stature in this way publically. If he doesn't do this, then he knows that the other noble houses will consider him weak, insane, or worse. There are a lot of things that will go wrong if he does not keep up his stature.

He is usually very aloof, very calm. His composure is renowned and famed throughout Soul Society. He goes through a lot of pressure and situations without losing his calm or his smile. He is confident, and exhibits an enormous amount of charisma that attracts people, usually female, to him. He seems almost too good to be true, really. His personality is one of the nicest, and most polite and calm in Soul Society. Even when directly insulted, he maintains this personality. He is known to be calm, and some refer to him as a pushover. He stays calm however even when killing.

His confidence is almost suffocating, and he is also very condescending. While he seems to be accepting and even very good at dealing with pressure and mistakes, he is usually someone that fakes it. "I know that mistakes happen" he says. A lot of times, he will be especially polite and confident and calm, and this is being condescending. He rebukes people in such a way that he comes off as one of the most arrogant individuals. He is usually likeable, until he meets someone to which he must be condescending. He always very picture-perfect. He is too polite, and his manners are too good.

He often shows a little mock concern for those that he cares about. He stresses on the less important things, like how expensive something will be, or how the good tea will be wasted. His concern seems like a joke, when in actuality he can be quite concerned. In very little ways, he shows his concern. He has sometimes offered his Haori to people when it's cold, or he has been a little bit too protective. Oftentimes, especially with his students, he will interfere just slightly in their lives to make things work for them, claiming that he can "make magic."

He never actually lets those he cares about fall into real harm. He lets them be in some minimal amount of danger, but it seems like he is always in control. He seems to be able to always keep command of the situation. In fact, it seems like most enemies can be defeated by Sozen. He never makes it seem like he's going to lose, and all battles seem to dictate smoothly into his planning. He is a very fine person after all, meticulous in everything that he does.

He often says poetic and dramatic things, showing charisma that way. Likewise, he will often say sarcastic or even odd things just to lighten the mood a bit, and relieve tension. His meticulous behavior extends to social situations and to other things too. It is rare for Sozen to be uncertain of what he must do in a situation. He is usually one of the people that is first to try to remedy the situation. And he usually succeeds in doing so when that happens.

His duty is very important, and he knows it well. He often acts and improvises to get his duty done, and goes to great lengths to ensure that not only is everything according to plan and duty, but according to schedule as well. When things are off schedule, meaning late, he is very disheartened with himself, or those that caused it to be late. He believes firmly in a strict organization for things to work, and he usually does things in this way.

Even when he's angry, he doesn't lose his smile or really change his personality. His eyes are what change. The anger can be seen in his eyes, even if he doesn't display it in the rest of his body. He doesn't seem like a normal person. When he's sad, he stops smiling, but he doesn't shed tears. Shedding tears is something that he hasn't done in years. He is almost always the strong one, and he is full of advice too. He knows and can do many things, and to many people just seems perfect. Too perfect.

He has a habit of getting too close to people, and invading their personal space. He may even take pleasure in their discomfort, and in startling them a bit with his presence. He is a man that can be counted on to make things fun, unexpected, and a bit too perfect. After all, that is his motto that he will sometimes say. When he particularly likes or approves of something, he'll say that it's "A little too perfect" with a good smile on his face.

Your Legacy:

Character Story: See Second Post.

RP Sample:

(We prefer quality over quantity.)

Powers & Abilities:

{To be able to use technique, Shikai and Bankai, knowledge and know how must be acquired in-game)

Zanpakutō:
Zanpakuto Spirit Description: {Describe your Zanpakuto Spirit}
Zanpakuto Name: (Name of your Zanpakuto}
Inner World: (What does your inner world look like)
Sealed Appearance: The sealed Zanpakuto is a rather fine blade. It isn't anything unordinary, but it isn't merely conventional either. This is a sword fit for an Emperor. It is only natural for the Head of the Kuchiki Household to have a blade worth at least this much. If one measures blade quality, Sozen's blade has the highest quality and is the most expensive in all of Soul Society. As the Kuchiki Head's Zanpakuto, in addition to known abilities, its worth is estimated at roughly 13.4 billion ryo. However, as a sword by itself, it is worth around 5.2 billion ryo. Almost half of its worth is from the sword quality itself, and not just the powers and who it belongs to. It is so expensive just because of how great it is.

The wrapping on the sword is red. There is no getting around that. The sheathe is red too, and ornately decorated. The red wrapping on the hilt is Sozen's own ideal design for his blade, for a select few purposes. It's his trademark color, only naturally. His sheathe has a fine quality to it, to where it can withstand the highest quality of bladework. It means that the sheathe can even take a hit from Sozen's billions of ryo sword, and survive easily. It is able to withstand blows from any blade, and none will cut through it. That is the quality to it.

The blade itself is long, maybe around three feet, or a little bit longer. It's curved only slightly, like any other katana. It is shiny, and the tsuba has flower petal decorative patterns across it. The blade is a silver color, and is fine tempered in clay forge. It is a ten eighty carbon steel, with thin and thick strips perfectly balanced out to create this perfect masterpiece of a weapon. Its forgery is masterful, and the sword has a cutting ability unlike any other. Only a master of use like Sozen can handle it without cutting himself.

Just touching the sharp edge of the blade will massively split open someone's hand. This is how truly sharp the blade is. It's shockingly sharp. It can cut flesh, other steel, and bone with great ease. The sword quality is so high that there is no other sword that can stand to it. It is presently known as the finest sword in Soul Society, and the finest Zanpakuto. Sozen's sword will easily cut other weapons if they aren't main weapons, like Fullbring or Zanpakuto. For Fullbring and Zanpakuto, cutting through them scheme works normally.

Shikai
Name: Akai Birido
Shikai Release Phrase: Raze, Akai Birido
Released Appearance: The Shikai release does not change an awful lot about the blade. The sheathe stays intact, and the Zanpakuto's hilt wrapping turns black. Meanwhile, the blade turns a deep blood red, as if it has been stained, and then made to glow. It's eerie, and is bright enough to actually light the darkness in times when there is no light. It lights his way with the color of red. It maintains a constant sharpness in the same way it has in the sealed state when it is in Shikai. All blades generated by the ability of this Zanpakuto also have the same sharpness as in sealed state.
Shikai Special Ability: There is no range limit, and the ability is to create blades from anything that is the color red. The Shikai has a size limit. It is only able to create blades that range from one inch in length to the full length of a "long" katana. Blades can be up to a meter in length, but no longer. They can be shorter than that too. The preferred length is approximately three feet, the same length as Sozen's Zanpakuto. When he creates blades, the amount that he creates depends on the size of what the red is. If he can only fit one blade on there, so be it. If he can fit many blades on there, then it is far more beneficial.

Moreover, his Shikai has the ability to turn what it directly cuts into red. It can't turn something living red. It can't turn leaves or trees red, it can't turn plants red. It can't turn something like gas or smoke or air red. But it can turn liquid red. And it can turn other materials red. It can turn weapons red, or it can turn clothing red. If it touches the other object with the blade, then that object will turn red. He can force many enemies to disarm themselves because he creates blades out of their own weapon, heading towards them.

If reiatsu strength is significantly higher, then he can't turn a main weapon red with his slash. Another limit is that Kido and other magical techniques can't be turned red. There won't be turning the opponent's Cero red, and there won't be turning a Hierro or other coating layer red. Instead, his power is consistent with what was mentioned above.

What is finally most beneficial is his ability to use the sheathe for the powers as well. It is not specifically the blade that needs to touch as well. The sheathe is special, and is part of the Zanpakuto too. The sheathe and Zanpakuto go hand in hand to complete each other. They make each other whole. The sheathe has the same ability to turn what it touches red. It makes fighting against him a whole new battle, and is yet another surprise when facing Sozen Kuchiki.

Bankai
Name: Akai Birido Seken
Bankai Release Phrase: Bankai. Akai Birido Seken
Released Appearance: The Bankai causes the sword to disappear into a flow of red sand. Suddenly, for everywhere in a mile surrounding Sozen, everything turns red. The ground turns red, the clouds turn red, and buildings turn red. Only living beings and their affairs do not turn red, unless they are already red. Well, the sky doesn't turn red either. This "red world" uses Sozen as a center, so it moves in the same way that he does. If he moves, the red will move with it.
Bankai Special Ability: Sozen's Bankai is a scary thing. When his mile radius world of red is formed, he has jurisdiction over it, and can create blades from the red. Clouds can make blades, if he and his opponent are high up enough for that. Buildings are red, and trees are red, the ground is red, water is red. Everything that is not an enemy and their personal affair (something they are wearing, or their main weapon) will turn red. It makes facing Sozen terrifying, especially indoors. There is no safe place to hide from him at that point. He can create an entire realm of blades with just one motion and a large sum of stamina if he wanted to turn his whole "red world" into blades.

Blades disappear if something stops being "red." The blade size has also changed dramatically since Shikai. The width of the thing first of all is capable of going up to 10 feet wide. That says that the blade has a lot of potential for cutting and slicing deeply into. More important is the length. It can extend for up to three hundred meters meters this time, much larger than before. If everything in that radius is red, then it becomes difficult to fight against Sozen. An important distinction is red skin. Native American skin does not count as "red." However, someone who is painted red, or by some unfortunate coincidence is actually red, can be manipulated to form blades.

Even in Shikai, this affair of the skin is possible. One should be most careful against Sozen. Fighting in the air is probably the ultimate counter to his Bankai. He rarely has room to form blades up there, and he doesn't keep his Shikai blade during Bankai. Instead, it dissolves into red sand, leaving his grasp, and leaving him with free hands. He doesn't keep the sheathe either. When his blade reforms after Bankai ends, it reforms sheathed at his side, without him having to do anything.

His blades are okay though. They have the same ability as the original Shikai blade. In Shikai, the blades were just blades that formed to attack. In Bankai, if any of the blades he forms in his red world touch something that isn't already red, then that thing will turn red. They can turn weapons, clothing, and personal affairs red. Only a living being that isn't already red will not be made red. Lipstick, it should be known is one of the worst things to wear while fighting against Sozen. Oh, one more useful tidbit. In Bankai, the blades Sozen forms are already red.

Abilities

(Max 12, you can add/unlock as you progress, but to be able to use technique, you must acquire it in-game)

Zanpakuto Techniques

Name: Aka No Suna (Red Sand)
State: Shikai
Terms of Usage: Must be holding sword to activate.
Description: This is similar to what happens to his sword during Bankai. If he uses this ability during Shikai, people meet think that he is just using this technique again. The distinction is that this doesn't turn the red sheathe to sand as well. Only the blade will turn into red sand, and float off. Also, in Bankai the sand just disappears. In Aka No Suna, the sand will become a small cloud of sand. It's small, having only a total volume of 25 meters cubed in space inside. But if someone gets stuck in the cloud of sand, blades from everywhere will impale them. Blades can and will form anywhere in this cloud of sand. When someone gets stuck inside of here, there is chaos.
Downside: The size is a limiting factor. It's easy to get out of, and the sand won't be able to stick to someone or on someone unless they're wet. The cloud also only moves at speed equal to half of Sozen's current speed. So it's not very fast. If he's weakened, it's even slower. It's also his weakest technique. It can stay active as long as Shikai is active. When it's time to put it away, he can recall the sand back as his blade. If the sand is blown away or dispersed, it automatically reforms the sword.

Name: Aka No Senkou (Red Flash)
State: Shikai and Bankai
Terms of Usage:Must be holding Sheathe.
Description: This power can only be used as long as Sozen has his red sheathe with him. However, it allows him to instantly teleport to anything that is red that he can see. It's instant teleportation. This is faster than any step technique out there. Also, it isn't a step. It's teleportation. He literally leaves behind the place where he was, and disappears. He literally dematerializes, and then rematerializes. This allows him to dodge attacks very well using this technique, and appears wherever he pleases if there is red there. This is the only Shikai technique that can also be used during Bankai.
Downside: It is extremely taxing to use, and can only be used twice a post at most. The stamina drain is also so much higher than normal techniques that Sozen will be left breathless even for just two uses. He will need to stop and catch his breath. Too many uses over a longer period of time will be a severely detrimental to Sozen's stamina.

Name: Aka No Suna: Modo Kyoujin (Red Sand: Mode Giant)
State: Bankai
Terms of Usage: None
Description: This is another version of Aka No Suna. It's a Bankai level. All of the red of the red world lifts off. The red world turns normal color, but it becomes covered in a large floating and dense cloud of red sand. The red sand is a mile all around, but is not in constant movement like red world. It can't change places like the original Aka No Suna either. It's a mile high, a mile all around. Blades can form from anywhere within it, so anyone that fights against Sozen and encounters this technique will get barraged in every conceivable angle endlessly unless they escape the sand and go somewhere else. At any time, Sozen can force this to revert back to the red world.
Downside: In order to use the technique it puts as much strain on Sozen's reiryoku reserves as his Bankai does to activate, it can last as long as his Bankai.

Name: Aka No Seken: Modo Chiisai (Red World: Mode Small)
State: Bankai
Terms of Usage: None
Description: It's one of Sozen's ultimate techniques, but is also has a very minimum cost. It's one of the more usable and less finale techniques in his Bankai. He does after all need those. He initiates it by placing his palms down flat against the ground, and saying "Aka No Seken" out loud. Then, the entire red world retracts, and he closes his eyes. When he opens them again, a shockwave explodes out from his body, repulsing any incoming attacks. It isn't a defensive technique. It's a release of power. This release of his power takes away his traditional red world, but it also lets him blast away incoming power with his own. Then, the technique becomes usable. The only change that had come upon him is in his eyes. He has sucked the entirety of the red world into his eyes. They have taken a new form. Because of this, Sozen gains a power unprecedented. He has the power to turn anything that he touches red, and all blades created eject out at speed equivalent to the blade reiatsu strength. The blades have a reiatsu strength equivalent to twice Sozen's. More importantly, he can steal "red" covering from things that he touches as well. If he does this, he can implant it onto something else too, turning that "something else" red. Example, he can suck the "red" out of a red smoke, turning the smoke gray. Then, he can plant that "red" in a top, turning the top red. He can only hold one "red" at a time.
Downside: It loses the advantages that red world had. Red world had a range advantage. This becomes a much more personal combat, and is fatiguing to Sozen, who must continue to combat while using his powers at this state of fullest. It seems like a whole new Bankai when he unleashes it, and it is like that. His stamina gets quickly depleted if he tries to use this for too long. It also, again, eliminates the advantage that he had with his powers before for red world. It becomes easier to take him out. This mode only lasts for 5 posts. When Sozen uses this, his personality becomes just a little bit colder. He becomes a little bit more calculated. His mind turns more to more sadistic and to darker thoughts.

Name: Aka No Isou (Red Transport)
State: Bankai
Terms of Usage: All blades must be retracted
Description: This is Sozen's weakest Bankai technique by far. It doesn't have any direct offensive ability. This technique is used for escape and maneuvering. As long as red world is intact, for no reiatsu drain each time, Sozen can quickly sink into something red to displace himself. He can then emerge out of anything else that is red. He can't hide, but must directly emerge. He can hide only if he emerges out into something that provides him with cover. However, he can enter ANYTHING red, regardless of size. That is an advantage. He can disappear.
Downside: It costs some stamina to activate this each time, and he can't use it to hide. It needs to be immediate transport and displacement. He also can't have any blades out while he's using this. Blades must shrink back into their red while this technique is being actively used. This can be done well enough, though. The teleportation is faster than using Shunpo, and is faster than Sonido. It can also be done at any time, and doesn't need preparation, or a "step." The blades must be retracted is all.

Name: Aka No Zecchou (Red Climax)
State: Bankai
Terms of Usage:
Description: This is Sozen's strongest attack in Bankai. The red world disappears, and instead flows into his body. He becomes surrounded in overflowing red reiatsu that takes the shape of a winged woman, an angel with a halo. It is giant when surrounding him. He puts all of his powers into this last attack. He plunges forwards, and all of his stats combine together to make each other equal to the combination of everything. When he slashes, all of his hyped up stats combine for reiatsu strength in one big explosion that terminates the opponent.
Downside: This can only be used once in Bankai. It drains all remaining reiatsu. It knocks him out of the battle by rendering him unconscious, and leaves in unconscious anywhere from three days to two weeks depending on how much reiatsu he used up for this transaction. It can be assuring to Sozen to know that he usually doesn't use this unless he is low on reiatsu and on options, and must defeat the enemy.

Non-Zanpakuto Techniques

Name: Shunpo (Flash Steps)
State: All
Terms of Usage: None
Description: Shunpo (瞬歩, Flash Steps) is a movement technique, which allows the user to move faster than the eye can follow. The focal point which determines the basis of this technique is speed. As speed is the main factor of the technique, the method is best characterized by how fast one can get from point A to point B in the least amount of steps. Training and skill are what determines how fast a user of Shunpo can move; users of little skill in the technique or those who have not used it for an extended period of time would obviously be out of practice, causing them to be considerably slower, which requires the use of more steps to move the same distance and become winded in a shorter amount of time
Downside: N/A

Name: Senka (Flash Blossom)
State: Regular
Terms of Usage: Shunpo is necessary
Description: Moving behind the opponent, the practitioner attacks and seals their Saketsu (鎖結, Chain Binding) and Hakusui (魄睡, Soul Sleep) in two rapid attacks. A victim may not be able to tell whether they were attacked from the front or the back because of the technique's speed, and even an outside observer may find it impossible to tell what the movements are.
Downside: Not very effective on someone of equal strength.

Name: Utsusemi (Cast-off Cicada Shell)
State: All
Terms of Usage: Shunpo is needed
Description: The practitioner moves at great speed to avoid an attack, leaving an afterimage which can appear to have taken damage.
Downside: N/A

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by Sozen Kurosame Thu May 21, 2015 6:49 pm

Sozen Kurosame

Sozen Kurosame: Human; Posts : 9
BD-cash : 3300

Post n°2

Re: Sozen Kurosame

by Sozen Kurosame Thu May 21, 2015 6:49 pm

Character History.

So you want to know my story? I'll be happy to explain it to you, if you'll take the time to listen to it. My tale isn't very sad, and it's actually quite happy. That joy was what made me who I am today. I had some rough times, but everyone does. I'm just a regular person at heart, but I'm also pretty strong. You'll learn all about me as you venture with me through my tale. You know, someone once told me that you learn even more about yourself if you tell about yourself. The more you observe about yourself, the more that you will learn. It's surprising, but I think I can handle that kind of party. I don't really like gatherings of nobility and such, but I do like to gather with people. It's fun. I like talking, I like socializing. You might learn some of that about me in this story. I think it's more likely that you'll find something else about me, something a bit more private. So if you can, I'd like you to keep it a secret. Shhh...Don't let anyone know...

Oh, me? That's right, I haven't even introduced myself, have I? You want to know who I am. Yes, that's only natural. The first thing about me is that I'm a mighty combatant. I'm an experienced fighter, a loyal and warm lover, a teacher, a mentor, and a student too. If you must know, I'm even the head of a house of nobles. Not just any house of nobility, I might add. I am the current head of the famed Kurosame Household in the Soul Society. This is one of the strongest and most famous of the four noble houses. I have plenty which allows me to be the head. There are many qualities to me, you know. I'm not so inexperienced as you expect me to be. I might be young, but I have admirable qualities if I do say so. Well, that's enough of my introduction. I'm Sozen Kurosame, and I am one hell of a Shinigami.

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by Sozen Kurosame Fri May 22, 2015 10:08 am

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Re: Sozen Kurosame

by Sozen Kurosame Fri May 22, 2015 10:08 am

Bumping for Completion. You don't have to read the whole history if you do not wish to it just goes on about a love story that goes through out his life.

by Sozen Kurosame Sat May 23, 2015 4:09 pm

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Re: Sozen Kurosame

by Sozen Kurosame Sat May 23, 2015 4:09 pm

Bump...

by **Suki** Mon May 25, 2015 7:27 am

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Re: Sozen Kurosame

by Suki Mon May 25, 2015 7:27 am

I am not even half way through the character description and abilities and i am already disliking this character. here is why:

Age: unknown. Set an age for the character but keep it within reason.

From the description of the character description he is stated to be the most handsome member of soul society, better looking than any other male in the Seireitei, and that he is the head captain of the family. It is one thing to state that it is an attractive character, but something drastically different to say that they are the pinnacle of how a man should look.

It is stated that he has the most expensive zanpaktou in soul society. A zanpakutou is a reflection upon the user and not something that could be bought. It would be a different story were it a keepsake or a token of the house, however a zanpakutou is without a price.

Shikai Special Ability: There is no range limit, and the ability is to create blades from anything that is the color red. The Shikai has a size limit. It is only able to create blades that range from one inch in length to the full length of a "long" katana. Blades can be up to a meter in length, but no longer. They can be shorter than that too. The preferred length is approximately three feet, the same length as Sozen's Zanpakuto. When he creates blades, the amount that he creates depends on the size of what the red is. If he can only fit one blade on there, so be it. If he can fit many blades on there, then it is far more beneficial.

Upon reading this i decided to to to give a benefit of the doubt, however when I see about the zanpakutou's shikai abilities it stated that t can make countless blades out of anything that has the color red. what is to stop him from wearing a red cloak and becoming unstoppable, with these blades which are apparently sharp enough to cut through bone and steel with the ease of slicing flesh.

Regardless of the description, this character sounds like every over powered character ever who is best at everything, not to mention ties in with a family that is non existent in this forum (Kuchiki). Unless there is a radical change to this character, I will not approve of it.

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