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    Post by Raziel Sat Oct 30, 2010 6:36 am

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    Basic Information:
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    Known Name: Joshua Hasenolo
    Demon Name: Dark Schneider
    Age: 2,180 yrs old
    Gender: Male
    Symbol: Demon Wizardry Symbol
    Appearance: See Picture
    Personality: Although he is the youngest of Atolicus's army at an young age, he appears to have a good handle on things and keeps his army organized and efficient. He tends to be carefree and laid back outside of battle, and has a generally optimistic attitude towards life. In the anime he reveals his philosophy of life and death, declaring that he does not believe in an afterlife and that we should enjoy our lives while we can. He may be naive, but more likely he is just too generous and trusting, believing that his "family" would never try to harm or betray him. He is forgiving towards his friends, but not so much towards his enemies. Now as the Demon, everything had changed he's almost completely thrown away his human life almost something a rulebreaker with an deceptive mind. Although, Darsh hasn't completely turned all demon little traces of human past are little within. He instead tries to live a human's life but become a demon hellraiser as well. Darsh will listen to reason but only if somebody fights him giving theit best and then he'll talk.
    Story: Joshua Hasenolo was born around the same year as Judas Iscarot. After some unknown & violent event, Joshua's parents were executed leaving the boy crying and alone. Growing up was hard without any parents getting caught by people until he was met by some army leader Atolicus taking the kid under his wing. At this point, Joshua felt blessed that somebody actually gave a lemons about him it was there that the kid started gaining knowledge and discipline. During some army training, Joshua seemingly started using weapons without difficulty the other members of the Captain Atolicus's squad thought this was very strange. For a kid to have such knowledge like this but Joshua must have obtained this skill through his instincts. Captain Atolicus started handing assignments and with his soldiers doing missions that would make a person proud or cry. But one day would seal his dark fate forever on a routine scouting hunt Joshua found a weird metal in the rocks hoping it would a forge a sword. The metal was unknown but Joshua took it to a weapon craftmaster to craft a great sword with creation of the weapon called Banryu. During his teenagr years, Joshua became the deadliest member of Atolicus's roman army hacking away anybody who seemed like an enemy to Romanian. The day came hearing about a man named Judas betraying the savior by a kiss everybody thought Satan was somehow controlling Judas. Joshua always thought was somethigng was wrong Judas that he seemed taking over by a dark force but he couldn't explain it.

    People went little crazy back in those days but nobody would dare betray Romanian then he showed up Augustus. This man was taking over everything and killing anyone who stood in his way. Joshua didn't want part of it anymore when Augustus's troops killed a beautiful woman, Joshua went berserk attacking romans until finally he was killed finally by Augustus. Joshua's dying words to Augustus that he would return from the depths of Hell. Joshua was sent to Hell, he met Satan after proving himself to be a strong warrior when some demons tried eating his flesh. A demon named Hojon stripped him of his flesh but it didn't stop him from fighting the demon providing the dark lord a great battle to see with his eyes. After a few more demon fights, Satan was actually pleased with Joshua handling himself but the dark lord wanted to now what the human wanted. Joshua didn't want anything at that moment but he thought of something that gave an idea to become actually a strong & powerful demon. In Satan's mind, he would have a strong demon warrior considering the human's past and his romanian training plus putting the desire of revenge into his head. One thing needed to be done which Joshua gave Satan his soul which actually transformed Joshua into a demon it was a terrible process which his human blood was completely drained. The demons started eating his flesh then the demons placed his skeleton remains into the dark fire transforming his body into a monster. Satan smiled thinking the stench of a human was gone but he needed to give his warrior a new name calling the demon wizard Dark Schneider. Darsh bowed to his master hoping to make the dark lord pleased then maybe he'll get everything that he desires in his new life. To prove himself, Satan gave him a great mission to attack some humans before they killed the Witch Haggis, Darsh was sent back to Earth. Satan had given him an order and he wanted to make the dark lord proud but it was almost too late the villagers had Haggis tied up to a tree about to burn her for witchcraft. Darsh attacked the villagers before the guy could set the fire leaving no survivors in the wake of his wrath saving the old witch. The witch was helpful in teaching the demon the fine arts of witchcraft and the demon arts all this for saving her life from the villagers. Thanks to Haggis's witchcraft, Dark Schneider started learning mysterious and strong powers for himself but soon after some demon killers wanted to avenge the fallen villagers. Dark Schneider was hunted over the years but the demon killers managed to draw out the monster by hanging Haggis. One of them decapitated the old hag which started making the demon angry with all the knowledge and power he learned he attacked the demon killers with his powers. The last demon killer was strong enough to withstand his new magic managing to kill the demon. Dark Schneider was sent back to Hell, Satan was actually pleased ever though the demon failed in his mission. Dark Schneider wanted to become stronger perhaps powerful so he remained within the dark underground and started training to increase his abilities. Dark Schneider after his training became a great demon warrior from the people he slaughtered and succeeded missions the dark lord gave him. The greatest accomplish was defeating the Twelve Disciples which who weaken Satan's forces by some angelic spells but Dark Schneider and his demon army attacked them sending them back to Heaven.

    Decades Later, Satan and God make some kind of peace agreement for the time being, Darsh couldn't understand making peace with the enemy. Even though Satan was once the powerful angel but it maybe had something of an impact of this decision but Darsh didn't like it at all. But Dark Schneider was revived due to long years of his servitude but he put his dark plan killing a shinigami and taking their power. He had wanted to go after the Soul society and burn the whole place down but their was one problem. The demon didn't know how to get there of what dimension perhaps the Spirit King must have some dimensional block which demons couldn't find the place. Until Dark Schneider finds the Soul Society, he decided to make peace with the new life he's obtained. The only way to start a new life was to takeover somebody else's life and start fresh and then find inner peace from himself and maybe have some doubts over what he's done later.
    RP sample:

    Melee Weapon:
    Primary Weapon: Efreet Sword
    Weapon Mastery: 10
    Training Done: Upon returning to Hell, Dark Schneider wanted a better sword hearing the stories of how shinigami have zanpakutos. The demon wanted a sword of his own with Haggis's witchcraft, he killed a few demons but their energies weren't strong enough to forge a sword. If Darsh wanted a stronger sword the demon would have to kill a legendary demon since Satan was off limits. Maybe one of his generals will have to do but finding a demon general would prove useless if he didn't have help. He managed to obtain the services of some demon elves which were having breakfast their prove useless into finding demons. One of them saw a demon general near th lava pits, Dark Schneider rushed over wanting to kill the demon to forge a new sword. The monster was snacking on a small demon drinking the poor thing's blood for nourishment, Darsh waited and attack. The demon general was a bit sluggish but the monster went through a strong defense transformation thinking it could save him. Dark Schneider used one of his powerful attacks against the beast but he did have to be careful not to destroy the monster. The demon general fell to the ground quickly he would have to act, Darsh didn't know how if the sword forge Giblet was around. Giblet was sleeping as usual and Darsh started yelling at him to forge him a sword from this demon general. Giblet didn't feel like it but he did wanted the demon wizard instructed taking the demon body into his demon smelter. The smelter was forge a sword from the demon's dead body turning the body into liquid metal. Then Giblet started to get to work which took hours to create but finally the sword was ready calling it the "Efreet sword". Giblet took Darsh that even though it has magic it does has weakness too because water is only thing that can stop it fire magic. Darsh started to understand thinking it was better then nothting. With the help of other demons, Darsh started killing demons with the sword and started gaining different kinds of sword attacks for his sword
    Secondary Weapon: Bowie Knife
    Weapon Mastery: 5
    Does your melee weapon use magic? Yes; Efreet Sword has strong elemental magic which it can be used fire swipe or slashes against enemies. The sword has a fire attack called Efreet blast which a fireball comes from the sword. The only weakness it has is water or water magic. Efreet only has three legendary attacks besides the unlimited use of elemental fire.
    Efreet Sword's Legendary Attacks
    Shin Majinken: By pulling down his sword at high speed, Darsh shoots a large destructive shockwave moving at supersonic speed. It causes great damage to his opponent even if it barely grazes him, and is a technique powerful enough to shatter an shikai attack coming at him or hado kidou.
    Extreme Reaping: By pulling down his sword Darsh creates sharp gusts of wind cutting his opponent without even touching him with the blade. It is said even his opponents are staring in awe at the beauty of this technique.
    Air Bullet: The sword will shoot up a fast air bullet.

    Other information:

    Saisei Oni 再生鬼 (Demon Rebirth)Levels: 3

    Form Name: Human Restoration
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    Form Description: Dark Schneider can revert back to the human that he once was which he can blend in with other humans. Clearly, He wanted to use this when forces are against him when the times is right to hide. However his body will completed heal from any attacks that has happen to his demon body.
    Terms and Conditions: By snapping his fingers and saying "I Blessed thy Sinner" the human flesh was appear covering his demon body. The bad things about it is his strength and speed is just a mere human. He can't use any techniques either. This form only lasts for about 6 hours (7 posts really)
    Appearance: See Pic

    Form Name: HellBorn Demon
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    Form Description: Really this something like his armored form when he gets ready for battle and he gets ready by using this transformation. He gains something like a super demon armor equipped with brass piercing knuckles and kelvar suit, spiked boots and a weapons belt.
    Terms and Conditions: By saying the phrase "Bring on the lemons power" The Hellborn powers is activated which this form increased his strength and strong piercing strength but also give knowledge of unarmed combat & armed combat like skills. Hoewever parts the armor can be damaged to strong kido like attacks or Grand Rey Cero.
    Appearance: See pic

    Form Name: Majin of Demon Darkness
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    Form Description: The Majin of Demon Darkness is a strong transformation in Dark Schneider's training. He obtained soon after he was killed by the demon hunter. This form was soon activated all thanks of Satan's approval. He looks something like a demon man. A demon manhuman like bat with different type of wings, one a pair of soft angeldove wings and another razor sharp dinosaur bat wings. Darque having claws on his hands and feet with sharp demon arrancar armor upon his body with weird like ears on his head. Also weird tentacles on his back.
    Terms and Conditions: He had to die to gain it. Just saying the words "Beyond and Behold the Majin" The form is activated. But now with the majin power it greatly increases his demon strength, endurance and speed. The armor gives him great defense for dodging or taking attacks head on. However it does drain him which he'll show signs of fatigue. The Majin transformation has but one major flaw, Darsh can't enter churches the armor will start to burn unless he leaves.
    Appearance: See pic

    Technique(s):

    Name: Napalm Death
    Active or Passive?: Active; "Obscure flames of Chaos, I'm calling you. Paranoïd Format. Brag Za Hass"
    Description: Creates 40 medium sized fireballs each one having a homing effect. It's a less powerful version of Satan's Machine Sepultura but the numbers of fireballs created is higher.
    Downside: The natural enemy; Water & Water Magic...or Rainfall will weaken the fire energy
    Charge Duration: One Post to Charge
    Cool down: 3 posts wait before used again.

    Name: Kokuujin Akumetsu
    Active or Passive?: Passive
    Description: Two shadow frequency swords will sprout out from his wrist imbued with cero energy then he charge with fastlike speed. Attacking from one shadow slash from the sword at first. Then Darsh will go berserk seeing enemy blood, he'll proceeds to slash his opponent numerous times with huge black energy slashes attacking the enemy causing damage. Darque finishes it with an X-like burning Slash to the face of his enemy.
    Downside: If the enemy has a great defense when the attack wouldn't work ro may cause medium damage. Light Attacks are another factor which will throw off Darque's sight causing the blades to dissapear back into his arms
    Charge Duration: None
    Cool down: 5 posts wait before used again.

    Name: Firewall
    Active or Passive?: Passive
    Description: Creates a wall of flames which size and shape can be changed at will by the user. It can also be used as a defensive spell as the ascending currents of hot air created by the wall can dissipate kido or cero
    Downside: Rainfall can weaken the flame wall or Ice attack can destroy them
    Charge Duration: 2 Posts
    Cool down: 3 Posts

    Name: Neo Kane Blast
    Active or Passive?: Passive
    Description: one of Darsh's best attacks. It appears to be a more powerful version of the Dark Kane. First, Darsh puts his hand to his side and forms a black energy sphere. Then, he brings his hand forward and fires a large black energy wave at the opponent, inflicting a huge amount of damage.
    Downside: It can be easily evade if the enemy had fast speed, fast shunpo, or fast sonido. Also it can be blocked of right $ strong bakudo or hierro is used
    Charge Duration: 1 Post
    Cool down: 2 Posts

    Name: Healing
    Active or Passive?: Active; For Himself "Avalon, I need you power heal me with you light" For healing people "Avalon I need you power heal this poor soul with you light give your dark judgement and restore"
    Description: Healing Power which from his energy can heal himself or an person whenever he wants do
    Downside: For 50% healing for himself it drains much of his 1/4 of his energy and he'll start showing fatigue. Iif uses to heal himself or a person completely will drain 65% of his energy and his stomach will start to hurt.
    Charge Duration: 3 Posts
    Cool down: 3 Posts



    Name: High Pressure Shadow Bullets
    Active or Passive?: Passive
    Description: Compresses dark like air in small spheres and shoots them at the target. It's powerful enough to create small craters in a concrete ground.
    Downside: Shield attacks
    Charge Duration: None
    Cool down: 1 post


    Name: Lightning Shadow Glass Bullets
    Active or Passive?: Passive
    Description: With a wave of his hand, Darque can shaped a line of bright-dark, sharp glass or some material by running his finger through the air. Once he made the line, it shattered and he used his control to mentally fire all the powerful sharp shards at his enemies like a machine gun with potent bladed bullets.
    Downside: Strong Shield Attacks or Strong Kido
    Charge Duration: 2 Posts
    Cool down: 3 Posts


    Name: Dark Kane
    Active or Passive?: Passive
    Description:Fires a large beam of dark matter. It can easily destroy lower level demons but can only be used by Darsh under his Majin form.
    Downside: He'll start bleeding when the attack is done
    Charge Duration: 2 Posts
    Cool down: 4 Posts

    Name: Devil's Void Howling
    Active or Passive?: Passive
    Description: Originally an invention of the humans, the devils and demons adapted the idea to make themselves deadly killers. In order to do that, demons implanted weaker demons inside of their enemy bodies. Darsh starts by creating the ball of sin which is black grotesque slime ball and throws it at the enemy which the little maggot demons will starte to enter the enemy's body By forcing the enemy to sing with its astral voice the attack of an enemy is rendered useless. The enemy will start to dissolve but they can do anything but sing as their body is torn apart.
    Downside: If the ball is destroyed once it half charged or fully charged the attack will dissolve and the ball of sin will dissapear drained 1/4 of Darsh's blod.
    Charge Duration: 7 Posts
    Cool down: One day (24 hours)

    Name: Man No War
    Active or Passive?: Active; "Grand force of the pentacle, Darkness and Light, the moon is full. I'm calling the spirit of the dragon king who died at war. By the sky, the earth and mankind, by the power of Simwajo. Grant me the strenght of the sacred three headed Golden Dragon. Man No War"
    Description: Summons the three headed Golden Fire Dragon who annihilates the target with his disintegrating bad burning fire breath.
    Downside: If one of the heads of the dragon's then the power the fire breath is weaken a little. if all three of chop off then the attack is diminished.
    Charge Duration: 5 Posts to Charge
    Cool down: 18 Posts to Charge

    Name: Judas Pain
    Active or Passive?: Active; "I beseech thee...Uphold the betrayer's will see his pain feel the terror of Judas Pain"
    Description: It was created out of mercy for the infinite woe of the traitor. Due to the despair of Judas’ dark soul it harbours gruesome powers. It’s gigantic power is equal to the black hole “Abyss” (the entrance to Hell), a real relic of darkness. In short it a gigantic beast of destruction the worse part is any strong wizard demon can summon it. The gigantic beast can do a whole lot of damage to anybody or anything. The gigantic beast has an attack called Anthrax Beam an large powerful energy blast. The anthrax beam is like every hado kidou attack combined into one deadly attack.
    Downside: Judas Pain has a huge disadvantage. It’s user is doomed since it inflicts incredible amounts of pain. even pain beyond measure. If a mere human were to use it, he would immediately turn into a pillar of salt. If Darsh uses it his left arm will feel greate pain from using it. Bankai or Segunda Etapa are strong enough to great hurt the monster.
    Charge Duration: 10 Posts
    Cool down: 7 Days



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    Post by Loli Gaga Sun Nov 07, 2010 12:49 pm

    Looks sweet, just a little Q&A for you here and there



    Name: Devil's Void Howling
    Active or Passive?: Passive
    Description: Originally an invention of the humans, the devils and demons adapted the idea to make themselves deadly killers. In order to do that, demons implanted weaker demons inside of their enemy bodies. By forcing the enemy to sing with its astral voice the attack of a charging angel is rendered useless. The enemy will start to dissolve but they can do anything but sing as their body is torn apart (Instant Kill)
    This mainly prevents demons to be killed by high-level warriors.
    Downside: Bankai, Strong Reiatsu Powers or Segunda Etapa can destroy it
    Charge Duration: 7 Posts
    Cool down: One day (24 hours)

    How do you implant this weaker demons?
    Is there anyway to avoid it at all?




    Name: Judas Priest
    Active or Passive?: Active; "By the ultimate power of darkness. Judas Priest"
    Description: Summons four sealed demons at the four cardinal points surrounding the target and engulfing it into their hate and pain. Once the target is immobilized, DS creates an atomic disintegration that erases the target from existence, its soul being destroyed along with its physical and spiritual body. Under his Majin form DS doesn't have to call the demons or recite an invocation and can instantaneously use the disintegration, even twice in a row.
    Downside: It drains half of his blood when saying the incantation meaning he can only do it one time
    Charge Duration: 15 Posts
    Cool down: 5 Days

    This looks like an instant death technique as well, can you justify it and make it that so that a player can avoid it one way or anther?
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    Post by Baka Yukimura Sun Nov 07, 2010 2:27 pm

    Ruru is right, you'll be RPing with this character, you need to modify moves so that your opponent can avoid/block/evade it. Right now, these moves or any instant kill moves are considered god moding.
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    Post by Raziel Tue Nov 09, 2010 2:30 am

    I got rid of Judas Priest your right it was kinda of a god modding move but it the manga it was unbelievable but Judas Pain is enough for me.
    Redone and Remade some fixings of some moves.
    I've also made three new ones too.
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    Post by Kyouga Tue Nov 09, 2010 4:02 am

    A few of your techniques seem very destructive, but since "Devil's Void Howling" and "Judas Pain" have very long cool downs, you'll probably be okay if you depend on them like last resorts.
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    Post by Baka Yukimura Tue Nov 09, 2010 5:37 am

    Like Kyo said, you should only use those moves as your "trump cards" or last resort.

    Btw, what manga are you referring to?
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    Post by Raziel Wed Nov 10, 2010 12:14 am

    Yeah Judas Pain and Devil's Void Howling will be my trump cards
    The Bastard Manga is where I got the idea for these moves.
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    Post by Loli Gaga Fri Nov 12, 2010 12:07 am

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